Elevator Pitch No. 3
Link To Pitch: Elevator Pitch No. 3
The feedback I got on my previous post was again positive. The things I changed for this pitch are cleaning up the wording a little bit and trying to make it flow better. I also tried to dress as formal as possible to resemble exactly how I would be in my real pitch.
Hello William,
ReplyDeleteI have seen many improvements over the last few videos that you have made. I do see a better flow and that makes it very easy on the listener to process. I think dressing formal is essential to having a good presentation and can help make your idea have a more serious tone and make it more credible. I'm happy to see the improvements that you've made. Good job!