Elevator Pitch No. 2
Please click this link to go to my second pitch: Elevator Pitch No. 2 The feedback I got on my previous post was relatively positive. One thing I changed for the second pitch is including some recent information about parking that was released a few days ago. I also cleaned up the wording a little bit to make it flow better. The most important feedback I got was on my attire. People really liked that I was dressed formally so I continued that into this pitch as well.